the notes from the piano18-01-2013 | 23:02:31 | 4 Comments

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The notes from the piano were broken because since the last time I played on it.It was dusty and dirty like a old book. I never played on it again for years. My dad couldn’t fix it so it was a problem. When I was walking home from school, I saw a mysterious house that I never saw before. I went into that house and I found a mysterious person: a scientist. He came round my house. I saw him trying to fix my piano and he did. I was so happy I started playing it and it never broke again.

By Cameron

4 Responses to “the notes from the piano”

  1. Hi Cameron,
    This is a really interesting 100 Word Challenge which I enjoyed reading. You’ve written in clear sentences that you have punctuated correctly. You have also used some good vocabulary in your writing. I wonder what the scientist did o your piano so that it never broke again?
    Well done!
    Mrs Stones

  2. Cool Story Cameron love it! 🙂

  3. Cool Story Cameron! 🙂

  4. What an exellent 100wc and your first one too!

    Well done Cameron you should be proud of yourself!

    Josephine

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