100 word challenge by callum31-01-2013 | 08:49:32 | 1 Comment

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One night when the notes from the piano were happily dancing , there was a knock at the door . Amazingly it was more notes , however these were evil notes and could not be trusted in a piano . The terrified good notes sprung into the piano and started eating cheese . after they were finished ,they immedeatly noticed that they were to fat to move. in fact they were to fat even to get out of the piano? The dark notes , who were already climbing the piano , jumped upon it . the notes couldn’t hold on and exploded . Everyone died and the world ended.

One Response to “100 word challenge by callum”

  1. This is a very good descriptive story Callum! I like your use on short sentences to create a pacy story!

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