100 word challenge #15 by Ben18-01-2013 | 22:59:23 | 1 Comment

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Charlie strode into the oak study, where the piano stood, he sat on the pine wood stool…the notes from the piano book challenged him deeply. Suddenly the keys sprang up and drifted toward him like a 3-D film! Chalie’s eyes rolled into the back of his head and he imagined walking through a beutiful wonderland the flowers bloomed glossy cobalts and smooth inky maroons this was a wonderful dream ( he could stay here forever!) However the vision vanished and he sat still on the stool all the keys were back. Very weird he concluded suspiciously! He never dreamed it ever again.

One Response to “100 word challenge #15 by Ben”

  1. Ben

    What lovely descriptive language, careful use of connectives and powerful verbs to set the scene. I especially like ‘Suddenly the keys sprang up and drifted toward him like a 3-D film!’ I can really picture this!

    Keep up your great writing.

    Mrs Darling

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