100 word challenge02-02-2013 | 14:17:27 | 1 Comment

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An adventurous boy named Fred was walking his dog when he saw a key laying on the dewy grass. He picked the key up without hesitation, but when he looked up the was a door in front of him with a keyhole in it that looks exactly like the key Fred was holding. Fred shoved the key in the hole and on its own it opened Fred went into the door but was chased out by an old man. Fred closed his eyes and when he opened them again he was in his bed Fred thought it was a dream.

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One Response to “100 word challenge”

  1. Some great ideas fin! Well done! To improve next time, try using different openers so you don’t have to say “Fred” all the time!

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